Correct two claims in the transmutation chapter

documents/validation/phonetic_neighbors_baseline.txt

@@ -41,15 +41,15 @@
 0.47	1	philo	day	content	phelo	light	content	86
 0.47	1	ruela	path	content	roela	scroll	content	85
 0.47	1	philu	candle	content	philo	day	content	83
-0.47	1	laenu	commons	content	laeno	long	content	71
+0.47	1	laenu	commons	content	laeno	long	content	72
 0.47	1	keru	bright	content	kiru	chisel	content	58
 0.47	1	kolo	equal	content	kulo	guide	content	57
 0.47	1	kima	scribe	content	kema	strong	content	49
-0.47	1	thero	fire	content	theru	thick	content	46
+0.47	1	thero	fire	content	theru	thick	content	47
 0.47	1	kelua	morning	content	keloa	rough	content	41
 0.47	1	menua	counselor	content	menoa	face	content	41
 0.47	1	shero	night	content	sheru	slow	content	38
-0.47	1	thero	fire	content	thiro	serene	content	35
+0.47	1	thero	fire	content	thiro	serene	content	36
 0.47	1	molu	container	content	mulu	low	content	31
 0.47	1	phui	flute	content	phoi	nine-group	content	30
 0.47	1	solae	explain	content	solai	gold	content	27
@@ -143,13 +143,13 @@
 0.50	1	ke	INFER	function	pe	SUFF	function	107
 0.50	1	phoa	do	content	thoa	AMONG	function	106
 0.50	1	koma	head	content	kona	VOC	function	100
-0.50	1	hola	laugh	content	sola	DISJ	function	81
+0.50	1	hola	laugh	content	sola	DISJ	function	82
 0.50	1	heloi	generous	content	sheloi	MANY	function	79
 0.50	1	seloi	insightful	content	sheloi	MANY	function	78
 0.50	1	wheo	elder	content	sheo	THAN	function	77
-0.50	1	thola	bring	content	sola	DISJ	function	73
+0.50	1	thola	bring	content	sola	DISJ	function	74
 0.50	1	hina	what	function	phina	FEW	function	68
-0.50	1	whola	invite	content	sola	DISJ	function	58
+0.50	1	whola	invite	content	sola	DISJ	function	59
 0.50	1	te	CESS	function	pe	SUFF	function	57
 0.50	1	phui	flute	content	sui	DUR	function	56
 0.50	1	muo	INTO	function	nuo	um	interjection	55
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
 0.50	1	wheo	elder	content	theo	read	content	196
 0.50	1	shaelo	brave	content	phaelo	feel	content	172
 0.50	1	whalo	large	content	thalo	walk	content	162
-0.50	1	thinu	put	content	thimu	time	content	139
+0.50	1	thinu	put	content	thimu	time	content	140
 0.50	1	shelu	book	content	selu	flow	content	135
 0.50	1	shelu	book	content	thelu	dialogue	content	133
 0.50	1	shelu	book	content	helu	smooth	content	132
@@ -196,11 +196,11 @@
 0.50	1	phao	parent	content	hao	pardon	interjection	111
 0.50	1	noshi	near (adj)	content	nophi	story	content	108
 0.50	1	shao	three-group	content	hao	pardon	interjection	108
-0.50	1	korua	heart	content	torua	year	content	100
+0.50	1	korua	heart	content	torua	year	content	101
 0.50	1	siora	joy	content	phiora	spirit	content	97
 0.50	1	hea	hear	content	shea	peace	content	95
 0.50	1	phoa	do	content	soa	sorry	interjection	95
-0.50	1	korua	heart	content	porua	purpose	content	93
+0.50	1	korua	heart	content	porua	purpose	content	94
 0.50	1	phiro	elegant	content	shiro	tree	content	92
 0.50	1	phoa	do	content	whoa	whole	content	92
 0.50	1	philo	day	content	whilo	white	content	89
@@ -209,15 +209,15 @@
 0.50	1	sila	community	content	whila	hair	content	71
 0.50	1	teli	bell	content	keli	device	content	70
 0.50	1	noru	bowl	content	moru	wall	content	69
-0.50	1	thero	fire	content	shero	night	content	66
+0.50	1	thero	fire	content	shero	night	content	67
 0.50	1	helui	change	content	phelui	word	content	64
 0.50	1	sholu	complete	content	tholu	space	content	60
 0.50	1	keru	bright	content	teru	process	content	57
 0.50	1	shelira	forest	content	phelira	mistaken	content	56
 0.50	1	sila	community	content	shila	winter	content	55
 0.50	1	phelona	require	content	pheloma	serve	content	51
 0.50	1	thuroa	grow	content	shuroa	shelter	content	47
-0.50	1	phero	fern	content	thero	fire	content	43
+0.50	1	phero	fern	content	thero	fire	content	44
 0.50	1	porua	purpose	content	torua	year	content	43
 0.50	1	shena	calm	content	phena	kind	content	43
 0.50	1	thorui	beginning	content	sorui	circle	content	42

manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/02_the_process.md

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ When several Phi words meet one English word, their descriptions and usage notes
 
 ### The grammar-led choice
 
-Let a ruling shape the sentence, and trust the push. *Belong* must go through `phelu` (The Prophet: the possession ruling made the verse truer); *Real* turned out to be the habitual `ro` (The Velveteen Rabbit); *useful* became the possibility particle `po` (Tao Te Ching: emptiness opens rather than adds).
+Let a ruling shape the sentence, and trust the push. *Belong* must go through `phelu` (The Prophet: the possession ruling made the verse truer); *becoming Real* fell to tense and aspect, the nursery magic `to ki kelu` already complete while toyhood `to te nai` ceased (The Velveteen Rabbit); *useful* became the possibility particle `po` (Tao Te Ching: emptiness opens rather than adds).
 
 ### Composition
 

manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/03_case_study_anger.md

@@ -43,12 +43,12 @@ The rendering states an accusation, a feeling, and a requested change in separat
 The Metta Sutta translation adds one more instrument: the ablative `lue` (from). When anger drives an act, Phi names the fire as the act's *source*:
 
 ```
-su mawha miona lue korua thero wei shia peloma pula.
-OPT NONE person ABL heart fire DAT 3SG harmful wish.
-(May no one, from the fire of the heart, wish harm upon another.)
+su mawha miona lue korua thero sola lue laeno thimu korua thero wei shia peloma pula.
+OPT NONE person ABL heart fire DISJ ABL long time heart fire DAT 3SG harmful wish.
+(May no person, from heart-fire or long-held heart-fire, wish harm to another.)
 ```
 
-*From* the fire, not *as* the fire. The person and the anger remain distinct, a distinction that can leave room for both compassion and change.
+*From* the fire, not *as* the fire. The line names two of them, the sudden and the long-held, and in both the person and the anger remain distinct, a distinction that can leave room for both compassion and change.
 
 ## What transmutation preserved and what it transformed