content(articles): plain-English pass on the funding links article

src/content/articles/add-funding-links-to-your-package.json.mdx

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 ## Funding Open-Source Projects?
 
-If you're not new to the content of Open \{re\}Source, you know a thing or two about the importance of [financing and funding open-source projects](/guide/financing). The time and effort that maintainers put into their projects are invaluable, and it's essential to support them in any way possible.
+If you're not new to the content of Open \{re\}Source, you know a thing or two about the importance of [financing and funding open-source projects](/guide/financing). The time and effort maintainers put into their projects are invaluable, so support them in any way you can.
 
 Supporting open-source projects can be as simple as starring a repository, contributing to the codebase, or even providing financial support. The latter can be done through platforms like [GitHub Sponsors](https://github.com/sponsors), [Open Collective](https://opencollective.com/), or even through direct donations.
 
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ As stated in the [official npm documentation](https://docs.npmjs.com/cli/command
 
 And there can be a lot of them!
 
-But you might wonder, how can you add funding information to your own project? It can be interesting to let know the world that you are looking for funding, right?
+But how do you add funding information to your own project? It's a good way to let the world know you're looking for funding.
 
 ## Adding Funding Links to Your `package.json`
 
@@ -183,6 +183,6 @@ On top of that, if your package is listed on the npm registry, the funding infor
 
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-**Funding your open-source project might be complicated**, but referencing your funding links a the right places can make it easier for people to support you. And adding funding links to your `package.json` file is a good start! It's not going to make hundreds of people support you, for sure, but it's a good way to let the world know that you are looking for funding; **and little by little, you might get a coffee or two out of it!**
+**Funding your open-source project might be complicated**, but referencing your funding links in the right places makes it easier for people to support you. Adding funding links to your `package.json` file is a good start. It won't make hundreds of people support you, for sure, but it lets the world know you're looking for funding. **Little by little, you might get a coffee or two out of it!**
 
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tests/prose.baseline.json

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