diff --git a/documents/validation/phonetic_neighbors_baseline.txt b/documents/validation/phonetic_neighbors_baseline.txt index 8c6b3ec4..6ea0fe12 100644 --- a/documents/validation/phonetic_neighbors_baseline.txt +++ b/documents/validation/phonetic_neighbors_baseline.txt @@ -41,15 +41,15 @@ 0.47 1 philo day content phelo light content 86 0.47 1 ruela path content roela scroll content 85 0.47 1 philu candle content philo day content 83 -0.47 1 laenu commons content laeno long content 71 +0.47 1 laenu commons content laeno long content 72 0.47 1 keru bright content kiru chisel content 58 0.47 1 kolo equal content kulo guide content 57 0.47 1 kima scribe content kema strong content 49 -0.47 1 thero fire content theru thick content 46 +0.47 1 thero fire content theru thick content 47 0.47 1 kelua morning content keloa rough content 41 0.47 1 menua counselor content menoa face content 41 0.47 1 shero night content sheru slow content 38 -0.47 1 thero fire content thiro serene content 35 +0.47 1 thero fire content thiro serene content 36 0.47 1 molu container content mulu low content 31 0.47 1 phui flute content phoi nine-group content 30 0.47 1 solae explain content solai gold content 27 @@ -143,13 +143,13 @@ 0.50 1 ke INFER function pe SUFF function 107 0.50 1 phoa do content thoa AMONG function 106 0.50 1 koma head content kona VOC function 100 -0.50 1 hola laugh content sola DISJ function 81 +0.50 1 hola laugh content sola DISJ function 82 0.50 1 heloi generous content sheloi MANY function 79 0.50 1 seloi insightful content sheloi MANY function 78 0.50 1 wheo elder content sheo THAN function 77 -0.50 1 thola bring content sola DISJ function 73 +0.50 1 thola bring content sola DISJ function 74 0.50 1 hina what function phina FEW function 68 -0.50 1 whola invite content sola DISJ function 58 +0.50 1 whola invite content sola DISJ function 59 0.50 1 te CESS function pe SUFF function 57 0.50 1 phui flute content sui DUR function 56 0.50 1 muo INTO function nuo um interjection 55 @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ 0.50 1 wheo elder content theo read content 196 0.50 1 shaelo brave content phaelo feel content 172 0.50 1 whalo large content thalo walk content 162 -0.50 1 thinu put content thimu time content 139 +0.50 1 thinu put content thimu time content 140 0.50 1 shelu book content selu flow content 135 0.50 1 shelu book content thelu dialogue content 133 0.50 1 shelu book content helu smooth content 132 @@ -196,11 +196,11 @@ 0.50 1 phao parent content hao pardon interjection 111 0.50 1 noshi near (adj) content nophi story content 108 0.50 1 shao three-group content hao pardon interjection 108 -0.50 1 korua heart content torua year content 100 +0.50 1 korua heart content torua year content 101 0.50 1 siora joy content phiora spirit content 97 0.50 1 hea hear content shea peace content 95 0.50 1 phoa do content soa sorry interjection 95 -0.50 1 korua heart content porua purpose content 93 +0.50 1 korua heart content porua purpose content 94 0.50 1 phiro elegant content shiro tree content 92 0.50 1 phoa do content whoa whole content 92 0.50 1 philo day content whilo white content 89 @@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ 0.50 1 sila community content whila hair content 71 0.50 1 teli bell content keli device content 70 0.50 1 noru bowl content moru wall content 69 -0.50 1 thero fire content shero night content 66 +0.50 1 thero fire content shero night content 67 0.50 1 helui change content phelui word content 64 0.50 1 sholu complete content tholu space content 60 0.50 1 keru bright content teru process content 57 @@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ 0.50 1 sila community content shila winter content 55 0.50 1 phelona require content pheloma serve content 51 0.50 1 thuroa grow content shuroa shelter content 47 -0.50 1 phero fern content thero fire content 43 +0.50 1 phero fern content thero fire content 44 0.50 1 porua purpose content torua year content 43 0.50 1 shena calm content phena kind content 43 0.50 1 thorui beginning content sorui circle content 42 diff --git a/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/02_the_process.md b/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/02_the_process.md index e1e25cdf..59a2843d 100644 --- a/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/02_the_process.md +++ b/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/02_the_process.md @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ When several Phi words meet one English word, their descriptions and usage notes ### The grammar-led choice -Let a ruling shape the sentence, and trust the push. *Belong* must go through `phelu` (The Prophet: the possession ruling made the verse truer); *Real* turned out to be the habitual `ro` (The Velveteen Rabbit); *useful* became the possibility particle `po` (Tao Te Ching: emptiness opens rather than adds). +Let a ruling shape the sentence, and trust the push. *Belong* must go through `phelu` (The Prophet: the possession ruling made the verse truer); *becoming Real* fell to tense and aspect, the nursery magic `to ki kelu` already complete while toyhood `to te nai` ceased (The Velveteen Rabbit); *useful* became the possibility particle `po` (Tao Te Ching: emptiness opens rather than adds). ### Composition diff --git a/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/03_case_study_anger.md b/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/03_case_study_anger.md index 1dc5da4f..78c2f472 100644 --- a/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/03_case_study_anger.md +++ b/manual/part6_mastery/ch22_transmutation/03_case_study_anger.md @@ -43,12 +43,12 @@ The rendering states an accusation, a feeling, and a requested change in separat The Metta Sutta translation adds one more instrument: the ablative `lue` (from). When anger drives an act, Phi names the fire as the act's *source*: ``` -su mawha miona lue korua thero wei shia peloma pula. -OPT NONE person ABL heart fire DAT 3SG harmful wish. -(May no one, from the fire of the heart, wish harm upon another.) +su mawha miona lue korua thero sola lue laeno thimu korua thero wei shia peloma pula. +OPT NONE person ABL heart fire DISJ ABL long time heart fire DAT 3SG harmful wish. +(May no person, from heart-fire or long-held heart-fire, wish harm to another.) ``` -*From* the fire, not *as* the fire. The person and the anger remain distinct, a distinction that can leave room for both compassion and change. +*From* the fire, not *as* the fire. The line names two of them, the sudden and the long-held, and in both the person and the anger remain distinct, a distinction that can leave room for both compassion and change. ## What transmutation preserved and what it transformed