From 7c3069163ca0465e92cb1e7b39024572591f8f34 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: DennisBauer <37552885+DennisBauer@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 11 Aug 2026 15:51:29 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] copy: reword features sub, add-entry caption, privacy claim
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Three strings read badly. The features sub-headline leaned on an abstract
"messy reality" and an abroad beat that never landed; concrete scenes carry
it better. The add-entry caption sold simplicity only, hiding that the split
is flexible. And counting permissions is an engineer's framing — instant
in-app deletion is the stronger, equally checkable claim, so claims[3] now
points at the flow in src/pages/account-deletion.mdx and wears the shield.
---
 src/components/PrivacyBlock.astro |  6 +++---
 src/i18n/de.ts                    | 10 +++++-----
 src/i18n/en.ts                    | 10 +++++-----
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/PrivacyBlock.astro b/src/components/PrivacyBlock.astro
index 64812b0..dff721a 100644
--- a/src/components/PrivacyBlock.astro
+++ b/src/components/PrivacyBlock.astro
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ const s = t(locale);
  * Every claim here is checkable in the app source, which is the point of making
  * them: no-ads (no advertising SDK in libs.versions.toml), no-analytics (Firebase
  * Analytics explicitly deactivated in androidApp/src/main/AndroidManifest.xml:19-22),
- * EU hosting (PRIVACY.md:105,171), three permissions (the only <uses-permission>
- * entries across every manifest in the repo).
+ * EU hosting (PRIVACY.md:105,171), instant deletion (the flow documented in
+ * src/pages/account-deletion.mdx, which deletes the account immediately).
  */
-const icons: IconName[] = ["no-ads", "no-analytics", "server", "key"];
+const icons: IconName[] = ["no-ads", "no-analytics", "server", "shield"];
 ---
 
 <Section
diff --git a/src/i18n/de.ts b/src/i18n/de.ts
index 823e1c1..4cde1a5 100644
--- a/src/i18n/de.ts
+++ b/src/i18n/de.ts
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ export const de: Strings = {
 
   features: {
     heading: "Alles, was geteilte Ausgaben brauchen",
-    sub: "Gebaut für den realen Alltag: Die halbe Gruppe zahlt, niemand schreibt mit, und eine Person ist immer gerade im Ausland.",
+    sub: "Echte Gruppen sind chaotisch: Eine Person legt das Hotel aus, eine andere kauft ein — und die Hälfte der Belege landet nie auf einer Liste.",
     items: [
       {
         title: "Cleverer Ausgleich",
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ export const de: Strings = {
         alt: "Die Transaktionsliste einer Gruppe mit Einträgen für Flüge, Unterkunft und Abendessen, darüber Karten für die eigene Auslage und die Gesamtausgaben",
       },
       {
-        title: "Vier Felder, fertig",
-        body: "Betrag, Beschreibung, Zahler und Aufteilung. Mehr fragt die App nicht.",
+        title: "Einfach — und mehr, wenn nötig",
+        body: "Drei Felder ausfüllen, fertig. Am vierten drehen, und dieselbe Ausgabe teilt sich nach Betrag, Prozent oder Anteilen.",
         alt: "Das Formular für einen neuen Eintrag mit Betrag, Beschreibung, Zahler und Aufteilung",
       },
       {
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@ export const de: Strings = {
         body: "Das Backend läuft auf Servern in der EU, betrieben von uns. Eure Ausgaben liegen in keinem fremden Data Warehouse.",
       },
       {
-        title: "Drei Berechtigungen",
-        body: "Internet, Benachrichtigungen und die Prüfung, ob ihr online seid. Keine Kontakte, kein Standort, keine Kamera, keine Dateien.",
+        title: "Sofort wieder löschbar",
+        body: "Konto direkt in der App löschen — sofort weg, ohne Mail an den Support und ohne Wartefrist.",
       },
     ],
     link: "Vollständige Datenschutzerklärung lesen",
diff --git a/src/i18n/en.ts b/src/i18n/en.ts
index 0f28bd5..4e8faa6 100644
--- a/src/i18n/en.ts
+++ b/src/i18n/en.ts
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ export const en = {
 
   features: {
     heading: "Everything a shared tab needs",
-    sub: "Built for the messy reality of splitting costs — half the group pays, nobody writes it down, and somebody is always abroad.",
+    sub: "Real groups are messy: one person fronts the hotel, someone else buys the groceries, and half the receipts never make it onto a list.",
     items: [
       {
         title: "Smart settle-up",
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ export const en = {
         alt: "A group's transaction list with flights, accommodation and dinner entries, above cards for the amount you lent and the total spent",
       },
       {
-        title: "Four fields, done",
-        body: "Amount, description, who paid and how to split it. That's the whole form.",
+        title: "Simple unless you need more",
+        body: "Fill three fields and you're done. Change the fourth and the same expense splits by amount, percentage or shares.",
         alt: "The new-entry form with an amount, a description, who paid and how the expense is split",
       },
       {
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@ export const en = {
         body: "The backend runs on servers in the EU, operated by us. Your expenses aren't sitting in someone else's data warehouse.",
       },
       {
-        title: "Three permissions",
-        body: "Internet, notifications, and checking whether you're online. No contacts, no location, no camera, no files.",
+        title: "Delete it all, instantly",
+        body: "Delete your account from inside the app and it's gone right away — no email to support, no waiting period.",
       },
     ],
     link: "Read the full privacy policy",